Ibteda
Twas long due. This space is for those who eat Ghalib, drink Meer and sleep Faiz. Your habits are very healthy.
And on frequently rare occasions like today, there would be my own humble attempts at poetry, mostly urdu.
dard ki jab intehaa ho gayi
ghazal aahon ki zubaan ho gayi
kehne to gaye the haal-e-dil
baat par yaan ki vaan ho gayi
bikhar gayi yun hasti hamaari
goyaa teri zulf-e-pariishaan ho gayi
hui guftaguu dil hi dil mein
baat aankhon hi mein bayaan ho gayi
aati thi sar-e-baam jo pichhle peher
shaayad woh kamsin jawaan ho gayi
chehra zard jigar lathpath aankh patthhar
chaliye ishq ki daastaan ho gayi
thi hayaat ke jinke dam se 'Kamaal'
woh hasratein ab nihaan ho gayi
[Ibteda - beginning, hasti - existence, goyaa - as if, zulf-e-pariishaan - disarrayed hair, sar-e-bam - on the terrace, zard - yellow, hayaat - existence/world, nihaan - hidden ]
posted by oxy_moron | 4:36 AM
6 Comments:
so you finally decide to oblige...better be more regular with this one!!!!! this space could be the rough work place for that book:)
Ibteda is awesome. KIU
-B
Bahut umda!
Zara apna haath e-mail kijiye, choom letaa hoon...
"bikhar gayi yun hasti hamaari
goyaa teri zulf-e-pariishaan ho gayi"
OIC. Why the #%$#%# wouldn't you write more?
Havent read it yet, not sure I will either... Ive got a block against anything Hindustani. But great to see youre starting something new. You know what... maybe I will be back to read this .
wah, kyaa baath hai.. bohath khoob.
pehle kyon nahi bheja yeh link... do ek lines hum bhi sun lete live
un highway wali seedhiyon pe
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